Design feedback made simple
Inflight was just announced and the marketing headline "Design feedback made simple" immediately piqued interest in trying out the new tool. Here's why it works:
The italics of "made" and "simple" create visual emphasis on the key promise
Directly addresses the common pain point of complicated and often overlooked design review processes
Suggests that Inflight has intentionally engineered simplicity into feedback as the product and not simply a feature
Clear and direct language makes the value proposition immediately obvious
Appeals to both designers giving feedback and stakeholders providing it (win-win)
Focuses on the desired outcome rather than specific features or technical details
In Inflight's words:
The irony is we tried like 15 different H1s and picked this in the 11th hour.
It took a long time to figure out the right value prop when the tool is flexible and it's working for a variety of user types.
So it was hard to just pick one value (organization, speed, alignment, etc.). Nothing felt right and it always felt wordy or to generic (ex: "better feedback").
Almost every tool sells power or simplicity. It took us awhile to land on simplicity but as soon as I saw it for the first time I knew it was right.